Audrey Haick Poet Narrative

The First Christmas

That first Christmas night, pure love pierced the veil 
When came His first gasp along with immense pain
As He cried out loud, His Mother's heart breaking
She gazed into the the most beautiful eyes then realized...
The King of Kings had stepped out of His glory!
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Wilma Neels December 3, 2010 at 9:21 AM Wow Audrey, what a beautiful write. You relayed your message so perfectly.. Enjoyed my friend, love Wilma

C.C Bloomsfield December 2, 2010 at 9:30 PM this is the true spirit of xmas. .beautiful!Happy bírthday dear friend!

Carolyn Devonshire December 2, 2010 at 1:51 PM It's a blessing that you shared this with us and reminded us of the true reason of Christmas. Wouldn't you have loved to see the King of Kings on that first Christmas? He reigns in your heart, Audrey! Hope you entered this in Francine's contest. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown December 2, 2010 at 11:47 AM I wish that I could vivify my comments to you and to all better. But I end up babbling and making no sense. So, I will leave you a message today letting you know I did read your poetry and I enjoyed it. I love reading poetry and the poets here are so talented. Have a wonderful day Audrey. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 1, 2010 at 9:05 PM Amen Audrey.. the true meaning of Christmas is so lovingly told in your lines .. good luck in the contest .. amazing no matter how many times u hear this story it always impresses with its glory as your poetry my friend.. good luck with luv..

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway December 1, 2010 at 7:01 PM Magical! Lay