The Fire That Melted the Ice

Slowly through the skies,
With the hustling winds anew,
Tiny flakes fell with a white misty hue,
Falling through, 
Dancing along,
Swifting around,
Though many fell on the ground,
Some fell over me,
And few had shun my eyes, 
So as i sat across the bonfire,
And through this own fire,
Burning deep inside my soul,
My smile would always be there,
Waiting for her,
And just as the light of the sun would melt this snow flake,
She would adjust to my bitter cold mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A  Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 5:34 PM
Nice featured poem~SKAT
Mamtani Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 9:17 AM
Thank you all!! You know everyone has to compromise with each other in one way or another!
A  Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 1:08 PM
love the gripping poem~SKAT
Guzzi Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 2:12 PM
One scary last line there [shiver] Light & Love
Harvey Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 2:57 PM
"Fire that melted the ice resounds of experience. A rapid moving poem, for sure! Nice work. "waiting for her... not kidding. Thx, Jan
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