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The Fire Rages On

The bandages that wrap my Heart fibers are Embedded in the music of Fire turn rhythmically around. I can't take you out of me like a Rap humming tune unfocused and groggy External driven broken clock. Rage, within me, yet I cannot stop crying And the terrors of the night are Grim; being left alone to Endure internal anguish. It Seems impossible that you are gone. Our souls were one, though I don't know why; Now it's a tearful good-bye. 8/26/2019

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Date: 8/26/2019 6:09:00 PM
wow, so sad and heartfelt this is. I can't wait to try my hand at one of his titles that grabbed me. It's one I can try to do as a sonnet form because the letters in the words add up to 14 !!
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Date: 8/26/2019 2:06:00 PM
So sad but incredibly beautiful
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Date: 8/26/2019 12:24:00 PM
- Beautifully written ... longing and deep feeling, Eve - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/26/2019 7:39:00 AM
A sad and lonely acrostic poem Eve but so wonderfully delivered and expressed. This was fantastic. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 8/26/2019 3:51:00 AM
" The fire rages on" until you too are gone... I like it...
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