The Fire Burns Brightly

The fire crackled and spat out embers
that gleamed brightly in the hearth.
Yet unattended they soon died away
to become dull grey ash particles.

Just like a fire need laying and tending
so too does love to help it strongly flourish.
Careful layering of dry tinder and
a few wisps of newspaper tightly curled.

Twigs and small branches added next
then a flame is held out until it ignites.
Take care to nourish your love
and show them sweet tenderness.

Gentle fanning growing more vigorous
as all starts to catch with a happy roar.
Feed it well and soak up its heat
and watch as shadows flicker on walls.

Bank it up well so it slowly smoulders
throughout the night. Fan the embers
and watch the flames slowly revive 
just like love does when cared for.

Bask together in its glow
as it consumes and flourishes. 
Filling you with love eternal
as you grow old together.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/20/2015 6:27:00 PM
Shadow, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 12/20/2015 2:12:00 AM
My fire burns brightly tonight, as my family rests safely here with me and last night temp dropped and I built our first fire of the year's end this year. With the added blessing of having my 8 year old grandson stay here with us for a week!
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Date: 12/20/2015 2:09:00 AM
THIS SO SPEAKS TO ME, MY FRIEND! Your form , message,spirit and delivery are all superb . A7 And adding this gem to my fav list tonight. Thanks much... Merry Christmas my friend.
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