The Fire

Coughing, choking on all the smoke
Barely getting any air
Cant breath
Glass shattered on the ground 
Trying to listen for some kind of sound
All I can hear is the fire crackling
As the flames slowly start to spread
Cant even feel my legs
Blood running down my face
Now every inch of my body 
is filled with pain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 12, 2016 at 12:21 PM
BRIANNA CALDERON, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Love LINDA :)
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September 6, 2015 at 1:22 PM
Brianna, Enjoyed stopping by to read your poem today. Luv **SKAT**
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April 25, 2011 at 3:38 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Briana. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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