The Final Thesis

Freedom life as sacrifice
But tell me what's the ending price ?
When most are bound beneath these chains 
And all one sees has gone insane
Shall I entangle engage, within my mind
Mortified's mortgaged morticious 
Eyes whom wish to cast me aside their spells
Melancholy's, projected tears while sounding crimson's rusted 
Bells behind these bars they've bent themselves 
Amid conceptions misconceived
This tainted truth that they should believe 
Twisted....
Now nailed upon judgmental's cross ?
Wretched flesh; turning it's ultimate cost
When smitten fresh permeates the air
Love's stench which gathers that they all may share
A feast in sorrow, from amongst mangled times
His cannibal's moment, at the expense of another's human life 
When the moon turns to blood, and the sun grows black 
Where right is wrong and wrong is back: to gather it's flocks amid her night 
While darkness rules within the most subtle way ? Freedom life, be your sacrifice....
But tell me what's the ending price; when most are bound beneath these chains, and all one sees
                                                                                                                         ....Has gone insane.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Cayton Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 6:24 PM
Nicely written. :) You are a very gifted writer. There is depth but such a lively life wisdom, as if you have traveled down a rugged path at times yourself and share such profoundness here. God bless. Lucinda
Ioane Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 6:16 PM
Deep and complicated just as the question 'whats the ending price?' Great piece dear Jeremy. Alofas, Tiaua
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