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The Final Star Isn'T Born

(The final star isn't born!) There is a star shining in the skies above you. There's a hell that likes to sink inside you, and there’s a ambition that stands beside you, and a dream that likes to catch you. Within these dark eyes, is a drop of our belief. As you fly in these blue skies. you’ll soon be up there in relief. With the world in your hands. Take a chance and take a stand. Tell the world another great story and with your stories in hand. Take the controls, take command and you are the star with the best glory. There’s been a mirror held to my face. Your face is what I see in place. I want to see it again and again. You are the dream of the girls, come and take us just for a twirl. We just like to know how’s it been. Your are the star in the sky. We will come to help you fly. lets take on this dream together, no matter whats going on with the weather. (The final star isn't born!)

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Date: 11/18/2011 8:09:00 PM
wow...very full of imagery... good write.-edwaard
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Abigail Tolar
Date: 11/19/2011 12:29:00 AM
Thank you :)

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