The Final Stage

We save some money, if we can,
So when we’re up in age,
We’ll have enough to get us through
That final “elder” stage.

To me, that always meant that I’d
Be set for life to spend
On all the things I love to do
Right up until the end.

But lawyers talk of nursing homes
Or live-in help or worse
And all my hard-earned savings
Someday might just pay a nurse.

Instead of using money
To get through old age with ease,
I’d much prefer to exit
A la Thelma and Louise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Slaughter Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 10:07 AM
Good one, Ilene. Of course, Thelma and Louise had Brad Pitt to help them along.
Callus Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 1:17 AM
I just refuse to plan or simply think about my final “elder” stage, Ilene! “Que Sera, Sera” as Doris Day would say! ~ Regards // paul
Greenhough Avatar
May 1, 2024 at 8:56 PM
Spend the money before you go. I like this poem. The last line is hilarious.
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