The Final Mile

I'm just back from a journey,
we each will take in turn.
Though not long in length
it took all my strength,
but I knew that I'd return...
My companion on this journey
struggled on the way.
No time left to mend,
he knew...in the end,
that he was meant to stay.
We rested just a moment
and much to my surprise,
I saw an image of myself
reflecting in his eyes.
I tried to make him understand
I had a hand to lend, but
he looked away and focused on
the light at distance end...
Though all will make this journey
we know not when or how.
When he felt the final touch of time
he knew his time - was now.
He shook my hand
then smiled and said,
"We're only here awhile."
I stood behind my father 
as he walked his final mile...

Cole Banner
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Stathakis Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 8:34 AM
Excellent phrasing so as to create the desired rhyme and rhythm. Congratulations!
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January 27, 2022 at 7:24 AM
Thanks so much! Always nice when others see merit in my work...
Radice Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 3:42 AM
Hi Cole. I actually read this three times. On my first read I thought it may end with the 'companion' you mention actually being yourself but you ended the poem beautifully on a very poignant note. Congratulations on your deserved win in Brian's contest.
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January 27, 2022 at 7:25 AM
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed this one...
Alex Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 2:43 AM
Great work! Congratulations!
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January 27, 2022 at 7:25 AM
Thanks so much!
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 9:13 AM
Outstanding. Heartfelt. Always write from the heart. That is where the best poetry comes from. Thank you for sharing Cole, Carol
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December 7, 2021 at 12:00 PM
Thank you. Though Dad walked that final mile recently, I think he would have liked this poem...
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