The Final, Awful End

But, without exception,
an imprecation to the old, a shibboleth
perception

then filters through:
the final, awful end of death
in view.

To some,
just their next breath
comes.

But, without exception
the final, awful end of death
comes.

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This is a minichu:
6/12/3, 4/8/2, 2/4/1, 6/8/1
Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD

I hope I have used these properly:
imprecation - curse
shibboleth - a part of speech that distinguishes one group from another,
  in this case, the young from the old, distinguished by whether or not
  they consider their mortality

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Date: 3/11/2022 1:26:00 PM
Great just great, You are talent plus********* Am impressed.,.yes? Pangie I lobe withered who actually write
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/12/2022 6:43:00 AM
Thank you, Pangie! I'm not sure I completely followed the last sentence though?
Date: 3/10/2022 4:30:00 PM
Gosh, what do you write after this one? ~ Revival Show MC
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/10/2022 5:24:00 PM
Soda Pop Shop 2? The form's repetition requirements seemed to make it hard to end up with much of a surprise end, which is what I was hoping I could do, but maybe I need to wrestle with it some more. Idea was old: death in view, young: dont care about anything but next breath, all: death comes
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