The Fight

Surviving battles, losing a war I never fought Through dissolved confidence, unknowingly lost By neglect I encourage with convincing doubt Pretending to not know what it is all about. Deeply pitted in a conditioned flow Without much care to desperately follow Unfulfilled destiny by laziness blatantly overlooked Trying not to realize the flight of losses booked.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/10/2016 7:40:00 AM

- I enjoy reading your first poem, you write great Brandy :) - Warm welcome to Poetry - Soup :) - hugs // Sun :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2016 1:57:00 PM

Brandy,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 7/6/2016 8:11:00 AM

Brandy Baker,:), Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I TOO THINK YOU ARE AN Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*