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The Fight

Today my spirit sags. I am lost in disrepair. This melancholy mood hangs thick, I taste it in the air. All hopes I had seem lost and gone, No future left for me. My false demise is imminent- Mere mediocrity. My potential proved betrayer. These talents were for naught. All dreams I once possessed, Are now but distant thought. And yet tomorrow rises, A new day clear and bright, In which I hope to find my voice. And so persists my fight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/5/2010 8:46:00 AM
Hope prevails however dark the night ... we are resilient who believe. Welcome to poetry soup, the home of poets and friends, and I shall be honored to have you as more friend.
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Date: 2/3/2010 7:33:00 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all..as this delight tonight... u should enter this one if the Betrayal contest being offered under the Contests Button on your member page.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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Date: 2/3/2010 5:06:00 AM
Well Written, Well rhymed, You've definitely found a voice - welcome to poetry soup
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Date: 2/3/2010 4:21:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ely. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/2/2010 11:42:00 PM
This is a sad read but yet I see the hope . Thanks for sharing with me. I look forward to reading more of your material. Welcom to poetrysoup and I invite you to read some of my material if you like. Have a great day! Scarlett
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