John Freeman Poet Rhyme

The Female

Because the Fe is before the Male
life has a fee to be paid by the male
the first shall become last
the last shall become first
“just like a woman!”  smoo…cheese!  

The price for life has been paid
By the upper higher grade…
the “Conscience” is life persuade 
The sacrifice has been made
Esau did not make the grade…
being of the flesh persuade 

The male is not without the female
Neither is the female without the male
Reality of life is a plus and minus
Conscious Love impulse unites reality of the two
Just the way it is, life is not an impossible quiz 

The heavenly marriage
Is given to encourage
Love impulse is totally one
Uniting the two, for life is fun
Simple and direct, of flesh not a speck 

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Elizabeth Wesley February 17, 2012 at 5:24 PM Now tell me John, I'm curious if the female is the plus or the minus. You could get into trouble with this one! :) Love the threads that weave in this. John Freeman August 3, 2016 at 6:03 PM A spiritual level of is needed. smile

Nette Onclaud February 16, 2012 at 11:13 AM what a superb blend of man and woman, .. your verse sings!.. terrific read so creatively crafted! :) huggs!

Cindy Lu February 15, 2012 at 12:29 PM Bibically, wo man means wound of man~ and I know you all feel it, but Adam moreso, don'tcha think? enjoyed reading your verses today, have a wonderful, rest of the day, God Bless, Cindy John Freeman August 3, 2016 at 5:57 PM Yes, but he did it to himself, having no previous orientation, other than "Don't eat!"

Andrea Dietrich February 13, 2012 at 10:35 PM ME LIKES this one, John. GREAT writing about the sexes right before Valentine's Day!

John Loving Iii February 13, 2012 at 8:02 PM esaus' problem was that he was'nt the son of the promise. but like any good muslem he opened the doors of his house. John Freeman August 3, 2016 at 5:54 PM Good point.

Gwendolen Song February 13, 2012 at 4:50 PM Nice twist on the word Fe Male and on marriage. I love my help mate sooo much. He takes his job as helper so serious and on many occasions, I wonder how I could have gotten thru my worst days without him...you are so right that marriage is arranged by God and is meant to encourage us. :) Smoooocheese, Moses! John Freeman August 3, 2016 at 5:53 PM A Natural marriage in its purest sense, is equal to our marriage as the Love that we are to God.

Lizanne Scholtz February 11, 2012 at 3:59 PM Wonderful poem John, love it Elizabeth

Anne-Lise Andresen February 11, 2012 at 3:58 PM "Reality of life is a plus and minus - - - Just the way it is....." very well written this lines....I like yours poem John,simple and direct. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise John Freeman August 3, 2016 at 5:50 PM Simple and direct communication, is the inner automation of superior intellect, while the exterior delivery can become ridiculously and unnecessarily complex. Do we really need the problem of carnalities' complexity?