The Feeling I Get From Her

im loving this feeling 
this love is so intruiging
i never want to leave it 
maybe thats why im so forgiving 
or is it she knows how to tame whats inside me
thATS right her names sarah
the prettiest girl that stands by me
the beast the rage
the monster wants outt of this cage
cuz when i be angry
she knows how to calm me
the touch of her lips is what gets me so happy
its very seducing 
i find it very soothing like slow jam from ready 4 the world
cause this girl 
is such a precious pearl
its funny when she kisses me 
i feel like Im O.D.'d
on some ectasy
with a 40 ounce of O.E.
please? Feel me?
your just what i expected 
the touch of an angel i feel so protected
u got me im yours so please give me you
you really cute 
are u to good to be true?
long time ago i had low self esteem
cuz it was girls like these
didnt realy care a bout me
Cause of you i have confidence in this fragile heart
a simple wrong and it falls apart
just treat me good like you been from the start
i love when you calm me
girl you make me so happy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/18/2011 5:08:00 AM
Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry Leonardo. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today and I hope you will continue to write. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2011 6:13:00 PM
Nice Leonardo, glad you have some one to make you feel that special way.. I think my fiance use to feel this way about me.. but, love bite him again,, and he shows me feelings that are so incrediable... enjoyed yur poem,..Linda
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