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The Feeling

The feeling I feel Is as dark as space I don't know how to deal With such an endless place. My thoughts seem to overcome All that is over me I feel that I am strucked dum For the world to see. These feelings of mine Are deeper than any sea or ocean With darkness combine Creates and endless motion. I am in an endless cycle Of darkness and depression That I can not battle In each of my sessions. Every time I move forward The hole gets deeper and deeper I try to look outward But the light becomes dimmer and dimmer. I feel completely buried With no way out And very wearied with out a doubt. I want to scream for help But no one will hear me For the dirt chokes my throat So I will never be set free. By: Fotu S Taeoalii

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/27/2013 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...David
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Date: 2/26/2013 10:48:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 2/24/2013 9:50:00 PM
Fotu... congratulations with your awesome deep and darken poem* GOODNIGHT!!! xox~LINDA
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