The Feeling

Take a deep look at me.
Do you like what you see?
Do you see the depression
That's deep within me?
Can you relate to how I/m feeling
Or what I'm seeing?
You can't. 
You simply never will!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 5:24 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Holly. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 8:37 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site as u continue to share creative poetry as this gem with luv..
Martinez Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 7:58 PM
I get the feeling that writting helps you cope. Which is good. I'm the same way as a lot of the poets here. Keep em' coming!
Mehta Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 6:04 PM
Creative expressions on the depression, Holly
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