Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Villanelle

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(From Lestat, my vampire chronicles poems) 


Silently the night again  by me creeps in... 
Evoking all these confusing feelings I need to conceal 
Thoughts and dreams filled of doom, all of sudden begin 

To change me into this hideous creature I cannot din 
This thirst for new blood is in me now reveal 
Silently the night by me creeps in... 

I live on human blood and that's my curse, my sin 
Lurking in the shadows to get my next meal 
Thoughts and dreams filled of doom all of sudden begin 

All my life dreams had just fade in... 
Now I'd become this monster I come to repeal 
Silently the night again by me creeps in... 

Going for a kill every night again and again 
Knowing things all the time I cannot reveal 
Thoughts and dreams filled of doom of sudden begin... 

I,Louis,doing what I have to, to survive in 
My life had been sealed with things I have to conceal 
Silently the night again by me creeps in... 
Thoughts and dreams filled of doom all of sudden begin... 



Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000
aka ladylove 
copyright2005


November,30,2014

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Paul Schneiter February 7, 2015 at 9:34 PM Dorian--WOW, this poem packs a punch. In writing scary stuff, it's often difficult to sound credible. That isn't the case here. Every line carries conviction with it. Powerful! (Hope I can sleep tonight,)

Arlene Smith December 10, 2014 at 10:11 PM Hauntingly beautiful write, Dorian... Hugs.. Arlene

Jack Ellison December 1, 2014 at 6:58 PM You are one of Poetry Soup's shining stars my dear sweet friend! Love and hugs, Jack XXX

Demetrios Trifiatis December 1, 2014 at 5:29 AM Absolutely majestic! A seven without question, dear Dorian! You have surpassed yourself! BRAVO! Dorian Petersen Potter December 1, 2014 at 3:32 PM Hi Demetrios! My dear friend thank you so kindly for stopping by and your very beautiful comments. Much appreciated it all always! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Gary Bateman November 30, 2014 at 1:35 PM "D" -- Please note the "typo" in the middle of the 4th verse, second stanza: "hidious" should be spelled "hideous." Wanted to make sure you were aware of this!! Cheers, Gary Dorian Petersen Potter December 1, 2014 at 3:30 PM Eh Gary my dear friend, thanks for watching my back. Much appreciated it. Took care of it and fixed it. lol... Have a great week! xxxoooxxx D. Dorian Petersen Potter November 30, 2014 at 9:04 PM Thanks Gary for watching my back, I really appreciate it! The typo has been corrected. lol... xxxoxxxox D.

Gary Bateman November 30, 2014 at 1:26 PM My Dear "D" -- A quite enchanting Villanelle write. I've written one of these Villanelle writes too and so I know what's involved with thinking the verse sequence through to make everything perfect. Extraordinarily Well-Done!! (And I like the posted picture too!!) And set to a dark theme, makes the Villanelle even more powerful as the poetic vehicle for your theme. A Big "7" on this one!! And it's going into my "D" FAV FILE!! Best Wishes, Gary (XOXO!!) Dorian Petersen Potter November 30, 2014 at 9:00 PM Thank you so much Gary my very dear friend. You're so sweet and kind as always. I really appreciate so much all your visits and feedback mean the world to me, I am so humbled believe me. So happy to have met you here at the soup and have you as one of my dearest poet friends.Have a lovely Monday! Take care. :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.