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(From Lestat, my vampire chronicles poems) Silently the night again by me creeps in... Evoking all these confusing feelings I need to conceal Thoughts and dreams filled of doom, all of sudden begin To change me into this hideous creature I cannot din This thirst for new blood is in me now reveal Silently the night by me creeps in... I live on human blood and that's my curse, my sin Lurking in the shadows to get my next meal Thoughts and dreams filled of doom all of sudden begin All my life dreams had just fade in... Now I'd become this monster I come to repeal Silently the night again by me creeps in... Going for a kill every night again and again Knowing things all the time I cannot reveal Thoughts and dreams filled of doom of sudden begin... I,Louis,doing what I have to, to survive in My life had been sealed with things I have to conceal Silently the night again by me creeps in... Thoughts and dreams filled of doom all of sudden begin... Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 aka ladylove copyright2005 November,30,2014

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Paul Schneiter

Date: 2/7/2015 9:34:00 PM

Dorian--WOW, this poem packs a punch. In writing scary stuff, it's often difficult to sound credible. That isn't the case here. Every line carries conviction with it. Powerful! (Hope I can sleep tonight,)

Arlene Smith

Date: 12/10/2014 10:11:00 PM

Hauntingly beautiful write, Dorian... Hugs.. Arlene

Jack Ellison

Date: 12/1/2014 6:58:00 PM

You are one of Poetry Soup's shining stars my dear sweet friend! Love and hugs, Jack XXX

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/1/2014 5:29:00 AM

Absolutely majestic! A seven without question, dear Dorian! You have surpassed yourself! BRAVO!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/1/2014 3:32:00 PM

Hi Demetrios! My dear friend thank you so kindly for stopping by and your very beautiful comments. Much appreciated it all always! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/30/2014 1:35:00 PM

"D" -- Please note the "typo" in the middle of the 4th verse, second stanza: "hidious" should be spelled "hideous." Wanted to make sure you were aware of this!! Cheers, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/1/2014 3:30:00 PM

Eh Gary my dear friend, thanks for watching my back. Much appreciated it. Took care of it and fixed it. lol... Have a great week! xxxoooxxx D.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/30/2014 9:04:00 PM

Thanks Gary for watching my back, I really appreciate it! The typo has been corrected. lol... xxxoxxxox D.

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/30/2014 1:26:00 PM

My Dear "D" -- A quite enchanting Villanelle write. I've written one of these Villanelle writes too and so I know what's involved with thinking the verse sequence through to make everything perfect. Extraordinarily Well-Done!! (And I like the posted picture too!!) And set to a dark theme, makes the Villanelle even more powerful as the poetic vehicle for your theme. A Big "7" on this one!! And it's going into my "D" FAV FILE!! Best Wishes, Gary (XOXO!!)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/30/2014 9:00:00 PM

Thank you so much Gary my very dear friend. You're so sweet and kind as always. I really appreciate so much all your visits and feedback mean the world to me, I am so humbled believe me. So happy to have met you here at the soup and have you as one of my dearest poet friends.Have a lovely Monday! Take care. :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.