The Fault Line

Some dwell in a place of possible demise,
By choice or chance we find.
At any moment the earth could give way, 
for they live above or around a fault line.

It seems  life has more to offer there.
More glitz ,more glam,a place to really shine.
Even though at any second they know,
They are at the mercy of the fault line.
The question is not so much if, but when, point the signs,
The falling , the crumbling, the despair,the loss,
All at the mercy of the fault line.
Wisdom or folly, whim or fate,no different than all mankind.
We live today mortals, above that eternal fault line.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Bhurani Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 8:03 AM
Short,sweet amazing write,,,,gl
Eldridge Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 10:18 AM
I am glad you enjoyed this write. Thanks JE
Rycroft Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 1:29 PM
Well said and true great write x
Eldridge Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:37 AM
Thank you, This write is all my fault! Glad you enjoyed it. JE
Sands Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 1:11 PM
Well done Jack! I like it. Good luck in the contest :)
Eldridge Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:42 AM
Thanks Heidi! Glad you enjoyed it. JE
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