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The Fate of Whole Nations

VI Transcendent in that unparalleled Attire! I confess I cannot help but admire, And always did, What all other men should find very Much Irresistible in her; It is as if, With the merest uplifting of that Proud and arrogant chin, The outstretched hand, it's slightest Touch, She effortlessly could defer The uncertain fate of whole nations. Suddenly, at the corners of the Mouth, that insidious little grin... And I am left wondering, again, what Now for these new deliberations?

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/22/2019 12:16:00 PM

That uplifting of that proud chin ahhh John I love how you describe her! I do hate that I deleted my old account but that just means I can reread your gorgeous work and comment all over again!;) all my affection kind sir!;)

Edlynn Nau

Date: 12/7/2018 12:25:00 AM

Interesting rhyme scheme, and absolutely fascinating topic. I had no idea who you were thinking of but I saw Helen of Troy. HUH without reading the comments until just now, ... I see my guess was right, which means you succeeded expertly in mystery, her mystery, and with us!

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/31/2018 6:04:00 PM

Oh i see i have to go back to catch up, with the meaning of this wonderful poetry,,will do...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/21/2018 7:03:00 PM

Troy has been found and possibly Helen existed too John. Your talented words bring to life the intrigue and enigma of that beauty. I enjoyed reading this superb piece! : )

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/25/2018 4:10:00 PM

and how she can bring god-like people to their knees... astounding work, john... how nice to see you passing through... huggs

John Fleming
Date: 6/27/2018 11:08:00 AM

Nette, as always, your kind comments are very much appreciated! I will be revisiting your own little corner of the Soup very soon...it is a real pleasure to read through your poems, Nette. My very warmest regards! :) john

Silent One

Date: 6/19/2018 8:18:00 AM

Who knows John... the future seems bleak for some, but not for all...

John Fleming
Date: 6/24/2018 2:25:00 AM

Hello again, Silent One. Many thanks for the visit and also the kindly leaving of a comment...it is always appreciated by me. All the very best - cheers! :) john

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/18/2018 10:57:00 AM

Its the tilted chin...gets me all the time lol...great write John...love & light...^WW^

John Fleming
Date: 6/24/2018 2:18:00 AM

Thank you, Winged Warrior...good to see you on my page again -- you are most welcome my friend! And yes I readily agree...it is the tilted chin that gets you every time. My very warmest regards, WW. Your good friend. :) john

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/17/2018 7:52:00 AM

Are you writing about the Statue of Liberty??? Or possibly the lady holding the scales of justice?

John Fleming
Date: 6/24/2018 2:15:00 AM

Hello, Richard. I never considered the Statue of Liberty for a poem before...until now that is :) It is in fact an ongoing trilogy concerning the legendary "Helen of Troy". I f you go back four or five poems or so you will see what I refer to; I have a little ways to go yet to complete the series. The poem is my modern slant on the life and times of this immortal and timeless beauty. All the very best, Richard...and please be assured...you will always be most welcome here. Many thanks! :) john