The Family Submarine

“Yes” here we go
Dangling to and fro
In the midst of a sinking submarine
Taken is our right
A future of constant fight
Still we all pull together as a team
In the midst of a sinking submarine
Forth and back
Bobbing so slack
As if awake in the centre of a dream
The seas full lashing
Awaiting of the crashing
So we all pull together as a team
In the midst of a sinking submarine
As air becomes less
On each other we must rest
And all pull together as a team
In the midst of a family submarine!

JD

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 9, 2009 at 7:16 AM
Together will stand… this piece is absolutely amazing. A mixture of passion and dreams. There is need for us all to be steadfast and ready to fight for our right. Freedom does not come on a platter of gold. You are great. Keep writing. Adeleke
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