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The Falling Rain

In this world there’s love and pain, I’m standing in the falling rain Empty hearts I’m to blame I’m standing in the falling rain Wicked thoughts a waiting train I’m standing in the falling rain My love has left a bloody stain I’m standing in the falling rain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/27/2010 11:09:00 AM
Hi David I like this especially the use of repetition.Although short it still conveys emotions,some lines quite strong.As well as liking this I think it is cleverly written. Luv June(sylvia)
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