David Dawkins Poet I do not know?

The Falling Rain

In this world there’s love and pain,
I’m standing in the falling rain
Empty hearts I’m to blame 
I’m standing in the falling rain
Wicked thoughts a waiting train
I’m standing in the falling rain
My love has left a bloody stain 
I’m standing in the falling rain

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Sylvia Coulstock October 27, 2010 at 11:09 AM Hi David I like this especially the use of repetition.Although short it still conveys emotions,some lines quite strong.As well as liking this I think it is cleverly written. Luv June(sylvia)