The Falling Piano

Optimism or pessimism 

the outlook is so bright ~ I’ll never lookout again 



Pessimism or optimism 

the outlook is so dark ~ I’ll never see it coming 


By
David Kavanagh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Flaherty Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 3:52 PM
Fascinating David Half dark Half bright Either , either way The Piano continues falling
Flaherty Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 2:04 PM
Im in total agreement David People are very strange indeed. I find those with the most positive outlook are not people pleasures and the pessimistic are
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 4:32 AM
It’s a strange human trait Christopher how two people can observe the same situation but come to totally contrasting views as the inevitable bears down on them cheers David
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 1:32 PM
Oooooh. !
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 1:56 PM
Better than a baaaah cheers David
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 10:58 AM
oh such clever lines David:-) hugs jan xx
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 11:08 AM
Thank you Jan your very kind Only a realist would get this one, cheers David
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