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The Falling Piano

Optimism or pessimism the outlook is so bright ~ I’ll never lookout again Pessimism or optimism the outlook is so dark ~ I’ll never see it coming By David Kavanagh

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 8/25/2020 3:52:00 PM

Fascinating David Half dark Half bright Either , either way The Piano continues falling

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 8/26/2020 2:04:00 PM

Im in total agreement David People are very strange indeed. I find those with the most positive outlook are not people pleasures and the pessimistic are

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/26/2020 4:32:00 AM

It’s a strange human trait Christopher how two people can observe the same situation but come to totally contrasting views as the inevitable bears down on them cheers David

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/25/2020 1:32:00 PM

Oooooh. !

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/25/2020 1:56:00 PM

Better than a baaaah cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 8/25/2020 10:58:00 AM

oh such clever lines David:-) hugs jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/25/2020 11:08:00 AM

Thank you Jan your very kind Only a realist would get this one, cheers David