The Falling Light

A piece of heaven
Caught by the earth as it falls
See the falling star
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 6:27 PM
Excellent haiku, Larry. Nice going. Ralph
Horsman Avatar
August 12, 2010 at 6:50 AM
wonderful Haiku here. Harry
Neels Avatar
August 11, 2010 at 9:07 PM
I had the joy of seeing one, you captured the experience brilliantly Larry ¤ Wilma
Richards Avatar
August 11, 2010 at 8:57 PM
Lovely .....they should be out in the August sky!!
Mehta Avatar
August 11, 2010 at 7:01 PM
A nice thought on the falling star, Larry
Arteaga Avatar
August 11, 2010 at 6:58 PM
those are wonderful see! surprising also, when i first saw one I was like What Is THAT! lol great haiku c:
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