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The Falling Light

A piece of heaven Caught by the earth as it falls See the falling star

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/14/2010 6:27:00 PM
Excellent haiku, Larry. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 8/12/2010 6:50:00 AM
wonderful Haiku here. Harry
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Date: 8/11/2010 9:07:00 PM
I had the joy of seeing one, you captured the experience brilliantly Larry ¤ Wilma
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Date: 8/11/2010 8:57:00 PM
Lovely .....they should be out in the August sky!!
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Date: 8/11/2010 7:01:00 PM
A nice thought on the falling star, Larry
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Date: 8/11/2010 6:58:00 PM
those are wonderful see! surprising also, when i first saw one I was like What Is THAT! lol great haiku c:
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