The Fallen of Gethsemane

The blood spilled on the often fluid ground
and marked the place where young men ceased to be.
Until a time when birdsong fills the air
and crimson flags demand “Look, this is me”.
I am the souls of young men everywhere
anointed by the tears of loves and family.
Avail this place with all due reverence
and don’t forget the dead beyond Gethsemane.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 27, 2016 at 1:11 PM
DEEP WRITE...........SKAT
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 10:44 PM
I really like this poem. You have managed beautifully to capture the reader in your theme which I feared at the beginning might be too....sad or brutal but instead you engaged me and kept me through the entire and I came away in a state of reverence and stand with respect before a poem I confess to have questioned...that is gift to reader: The surprise and ownership the poem commands
Williams Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 7:23 AM
Ben, very well crafted, I like this..David
J.T. Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 1:24 AM
Nice poem. I love the mood that it depicts - JH
Hamilton Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 2:03 AM
Thank you for your responses JH Ben
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