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The Fallen of Gethsemane

The blood spilled on the often fluid ground and marked the place where young men ceased to be. Until a time when birdsong fills the air and crimson flags demand “Look, this is me”. I am the souls of young men everywhere anointed by the tears of loves and family. Avail this place with all due reverence and don’t forget the dead beyond Gethsemane.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/27/2016 1:11:00 PM
DEEP WRITE...........SKAT
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Date: 1/13/2013 10:44:00 PM
I really like this poem. You have managed beautifully to capture the reader in your theme which I feared at the beginning might be too....sad or brutal but instead you engaged me and kept me through the entire and I came away in a state of reverence and stand with respect before a poem I confess to have questioned...that is gift to reader: The surprise and ownership the poem commands
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Date: 1/13/2013 7:23:00 AM
Ben, very well crafted, I like this..David
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Date: 1/2/2013 1:24:00 AM
Nice poem. I love the mood that it depicts - JH
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Date: 1/2/2013 2:03:00 AM
Thank you for your responses JH Ben

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