Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

The Fall Alouette

The hammock invites
Fantasy of flight.
Not now though, small boy in tow
"Grangee, watch me play
I'll dump fresh mowed hay,"
His imagination grows

Cat and dog take place
At my sides in space.
Hammock starts to slip and slide.
Scat cat; shoo away 
dog before doomsday.
Zip, flip onto the floor bruised pride

Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
Contest: A Lovely Alouette
Written: September 05, 2014
I fell out of the hammock yesterday
my head hit the wall with a very
hard blow..I am having headaches
and neck pain as well as low spinal
problems since the fall.."Pride goeth
before destruction and a haughty
spirit before a fall" Proverbs 16:18..
I wonder what God wants me to learn..

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Andrea Dietrich September 15, 2014 at 3:57 PM oh my, I was imagining a grandpa did this one!! You really fooled me, Sara! So grangee is a woman, huh? This was adorable. Congrats for your win.

Brenda Meier-Hans September 15, 2014 at 1:52 PM Back to congratulate you on this sweet poem Sara.

Jan Allison September 15, 2014 at 1:30 PM Ouch Sara and i hope you are feeling better! congrats on a great win:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong September 15, 2014 at 6:52 AM Oh Sara, you will forever have a memory of your accidental fall with this unique Alouette. I hope you will be okay. I know how you feel. I was on crutches after breaking four bones in my foot and I fell down the stairs hurting my head,neck and shoulder and knee injuring my big toe on my good foot. How can one little fall do so much damage? It was easy. Lol. Congrats on your win. God Bless, Connie

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 15, 2014 at 6:24 AM Back wid huge congrats on ur winning awesome write Sara!

Brenda Meier-Hans September 6, 2014 at 9:13 PM I hope you are feeling better today Sara. Very lovely poem.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 5, 2014 at 12:03 PM Another Magnificent write Sara! U hv an amazing pen! Good luck my friend!

Harry Horsman September 5, 2014 at 11:31 AM Well it is not poetry Sara, that is a wonderful strength you have,,,brilliant poem love this,,,,take care ...Harry Sara Kendrick September 5, 2014 at 3:52 PM Harry, Thanks for the encouraging and inspiring comments..A wee boy told me, "I know what to do in case of an emergency"..I said, "What do you do in case of an emergency call 911?"..He said, "I know what to do in case of an emergency go get momma"..Sara