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The Failed Abortion

The mistake The quick fix The failed attempt The unwanted one The sunshine The adored one The saving grace The thread that hold them together The never told truth The hidden agenda The naked shame The surviving gift

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/17/2015 5:39:00 PM

Both sides of the picture. Luckily a mistake that did not lead to a completely worse one! Whatever the reasons, the 'surviving gift' had every right to live. The mother will be grateful that the correct choice was eventually made. // paul

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 7/19/2015 9:28:00 PM

Yes she will. Better to have life than to take it away(in the case of abortion) . Thank u paul for the visit and the support