The Fading of Twilight

The twilight started to fade Dusk showing it's power once again The holy time, when the night spread her wings And the two oceans combining in each other stop their tides Between them is a wall, which at this time is forbidden to cross This time symbolizes immense beauty and power of God How the sunny day is turned into something more beautiful Everything misty yet nothing hides its glow All objects giving a lilac hue For the sun has not yet fully set Yet you can see the stars and the moon Illuminating the sky with a celestial tune Replacing the powerless sun which once stood fair The power of dusk, leaving sun in despair The whole horizon gets filled with happiness birds and robin sing their melodies you can see the leaves, auburn and golden in dim sun rays The sky is overshadowed by the color grey Red and dark flowers start to bloom The twilight is fading away Yet this tired sun has to stay Till the night doesn't completely win over The magic is at its fullest during this time The sky as if it is deeply drunk with wine Deep and dark yet something shining When everything is lost, in them this is a hope Soon the sunlight will fade but moon and the stars will join the show
1st August 2018
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Marcum Wong Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Your attention to detail makes this poem shine Faraz! Beautiful from beginning to end! : )
Pruitt Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 10:18 PM
Faraz, your words literally seemed to dance to the music of dusk and dawn. I reread the poem twice just for it's beauty..Reta
Breidenthal Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 5:08 AM
Wow, amazing poetry and such beauty portrayed here. <33 ^~^
Salehi Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 12:48 PM
Magnificent job...
Roper Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 9:32 PM
Faraz, love the beautiful imagery ,, your writing is well done... Enjoyed reading and a favorite..Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Onclaud Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 4:35 PM
you portray the beauty of dusk flawlessly, faraz... winning wishes!....huggs
Stearns Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 1:43 PM
I like "the birds start to sing their melodies"and"The magic is at its fullest during this time The sky as if it is deeply drunk with wine". This is a visual and rhythmic piece with hope and heart.
Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 3:30 PM
You painted a beautiful picture of dusk. I have always found it to be the loveliest time of day.
Pandit Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 2:12 PM
What a beautiful poem this is! Details in your poem are full of cosmic imagery and delightful commentary..well done, Faraz..best for a win.
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