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The fading of twilight

The twilight started to fade Dusk showing it's power once again This is the the holy time, when the wings of night spread Even the two oceans combining in each other stops In between them is a wall, which at this time is forbidden to cross This is the time of immense beauty and of power of God How the sunny day is turn into something more beautiful Everything is misty yet nothing is hiding All objects giving them a lilac hue For the sun has not yet fully set Yet you can see the stars and the moon Slowly slowly illuminating the sky with a celestial tune Replacing the powerless sun which once stand there The power of dusk, leaving sun in despair Suddenly the whole horizon is filled with happiness The birds start to sing their melodies, a robin start to sing you can see the leaves, auburn and golden in dim sun rays At this time they look more gorgeous than they can ever be The sky becomes grey Red and dark flowers start to bloom The twilight is fading away Yet this tired sun has to stay Till the night don't completely win over At this time, the situation of sun is like a rover No where to go, yet it must stand there The magic is at its fullest during this time The sky as if it is deeply drunk with wine Deep and dark yet something is shining When everything is lost, in them this is a hope Soon the sunlight will fade but moon and the stars will join the show
30 lines 1st August 2018

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Date: 9/1/2018 3:47:00 PM
Your attention to detail makes this poem shine Faraz! Beautiful from beginning to end! : )
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Date: 8/23/2018 10:18:00 PM
Faraz, your words literally seemed to dance to the music of dusk and dawn. I reread the poem twice just for it's beauty..Reta
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Date: 8/17/2018 5:08:00 AM
Wow, amazing poetry and such beauty portrayed here. <33 ^~^
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Date: 8/12/2018 12:48:00 PM
Magnificent job...
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Date: 8/8/2018 9:32:00 PM
Faraz, love the beautiful imagery ,, your writing is well done... Enjoyed reading and a favorite..Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/6/2018 4:35:00 PM
you portray the beauty of dusk flawlessly, faraz... winning wishes!....huggs
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Date: 8/2/2018 1:43:00 PM
I like "the birds start to sing their melodies"and"The magic is at its fullest during this time The sky as if it is deeply drunk with wine". This is a visual and rhythmic piece with hope and heart.
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Date: 8/1/2018 3:30:00 PM
You painted a beautiful picture of dusk. I have always found it to be the loveliest time of day.
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Date: 8/1/2018 2:12:00 PM
What a beautiful poem this is! Details in your poem are full of cosmic imagery and delightful commentary..well done, Faraz..best for a win.
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