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The Face of the Earth

Am I the only one who doesn't care it's raining?
That it's cold outside and no one's on the street 
When the wind is blowing a hundred miles an hour 
And the earth decides to shake its fist at me  

When the elements electrocute my senses 
And lightning carves the sky with angry streaks 
When flying branches shatter picket fences 
And thunder gives an awe inspiring speech 

When the water that surrounds me churns and vomits 
And the shoreline has no choice but to retreat 
Not a morsel of my soul is craving shelter
I choke on rain and plant my stubborn feet 

This is the fragile life that we inherit 
These are the numbered days that mark my place
The Earth can be so damn intimidating
But I'm happy any time it shows its face
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ober Avatar
December 6, 2012 at 1:51 PM
I love everything about this poem - the rhythm, the word choice, the rhymes. Awesome job! Officially faved.
Madonsela Avatar
November 23, 2012 at 8:18 AM
written with such beauty and truth. Love it. I liked they way you gave life to the element and with gave your poem quite and eadge.
Ellison Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 5:45 AM
"The earth can be so damn intimidating"... sure ain't just whistlin' Dixie, my friend! Well crafted... cheers!
A  Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 3:47 PM
kyle, i like happy thoughts, indeed I love your poem~SKAT~
Poet Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 11:12 AM
A great poem here kyle!Enjoyed the read.
Onclaud Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 11:11 AM
i like the reflective feel and depth of this piece, kyle.. everything tends to point at an inner rambling... superbly woven!..:) huggs
Lamoureux Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 10:05 AM
This is exceptional Kyle, I admire your spirit. I imagine your family to be afraid for your safety. Well written poem, I very much enjoyed. I had to get a towel to dry myself after reading it.
Madonsela Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 6:45 AM
THE FLOW WAS BEAUTIFULLY CARRIED THROUGH . LOVED THEME AND ALL THE CONCERPTS INCLUDED. *SMILES* RON
Sweetheart Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 7:38 AM
STUNNING PERCEPTIONS AND VIBRANT ANALOGIES KYLE IN THIS TREMENDOUS WRITE LUV .. I ESPECIALLY AM DRAWN TO SECOND VERSE .. WE EXPECT 'SANDY' TO BRING ALL U PENNED THIS WEEK ..
Brown Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 7:25 AM
What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Kyle. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX
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