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The Eyes Of Aggy

Was it her face the mist belies The glow of green held piercing eyes These woods I dare to walk this night Are shimmered still by fear and fright When Aggy lived and walked the earth Her eyes were rumored since her birth To hold the power of a witch To summon darkness, black as pitch Should you be lured into her lair Within her voodoo to ensnare Her bidding then forevermore Your fate to follow, fast and sure Yet through the woods, this Hallow’s Eve Despite the mist sent to deceive I risk where she is known to dwell Where eyes of Aggy cast their spell

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Date: 11/6/2024 11:15:00 PM
Hi Mike yes a chilly ,scary poem so well created . A real spooky tale. Huge congrats on your wonderful deserved win dear friend. I see those eyes of Aggy so vividly in my mind, hope I dont dream of them tonight. Hope you are keeping well my friend, blessings Jennifer..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/7/2024 4:16:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer xxoo
Date: 10/27/2024 9:31:00 PM
smooth write, thrilling. congratulations dear poet. cheers.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/29/2024 3:51:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely compliment!
Date: 10/27/2024 10:23:00 AM
A great Halloween tale that deserved such high placement.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/29/2024 3:51:00 PM
Thank you so much Victor!
Date: 10/27/2024 7:10:00 AM
Mike, I enjoyed your spooky tale, very well penned. Congratulations on your win, it would have placed higher with a "Haunted" title.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/27/2024 9:27:00 AM
Thank you Tania! Somehow, I blanked on that requirement! I must not have had enough coffee that morning!!!
Date: 10/23/2024 7:15:00 AM
Hello Mike, I loved this Halloweenish tale. I think you eloquently captured the allure and fear associated with local folklore and the thrill of confronting the unknown on a night when the boundary between the living and the dead is said to blur. Excellent! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/23/2024 10:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Daniel!!
Date: 10/20/2024 1:21:00 PM
Haunting poem Mike... Fitting for this time of the year..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/21/2024 4:04:00 AM
Thank you Silent One, Happy Monday sir!!
Date: 10/20/2024 4:43:00 AM
Great one Mike. This could have a part 2 and you could tell us how the venture goes! Well done. Happy Sunday :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/20/2024 8:05:00 AM
Thank you Heidi, happy Sunday xxoo
Date: 10/20/2024 2:12:00 AM
You won't catch me going to those woods Mike - not in a fit - I spooked myself writing the 'Halloween Night' Lol - let alone venturing out. Thinking of doing another one though. Us humans never learn do we. Maria
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/20/2024 8:04:00 AM
I'm gonna check that out!! Thank you Maria xxoo
Date: 10/19/2024 4:02:00 PM
Hello Mike Gentile, i would not want to meet her in the dark. Or in thje daylight. Happy Saturday. xxxx-oooo./Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/22/2024 11:15:00 AM
Hello Mike, It is autumn , but feel like summer. I am hot , today i raked leaves. tomorrow will be raking more leaves. Your welcome. Happy Tuesday. xxxx-oooo./Darlene/
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/20/2024 8:04:00 AM
Thank you so much Darlene Happy Sunday xxoo
Date: 10/19/2024 9:18:00 AM
Woods are eerie at the best of times even in the day, you always wonder is anything lurking behind a tree. Enjoyed your spooky tale Mike, good luck in the contest. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/19/2024 12:00:00 PM
Thank you Tom!!
Date: 10/19/2024 8:40:00 AM
Great write, Mike! Oft we are drawn to places we should not go. Stay far from the eyes of Aggy ;)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/19/2024 12:00:00 PM
Thanks Kim, Happy Saturday xxoo

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