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The Eyes Have It

Some are ever hollow
Some are full of lies
Some are evil; menacing
Some are old and wise

Some are full of mischief
Some are full of fear
Some are deep and soulful
Others full of tears

Some are ever roving
Some are ever cold
Some are ever staring
Some are even rolled!

Some are ever flirting
Some are green or blue
Mine are eyes 
That can’t disguise
The love they hold for you

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Mahtab Bangalee Date: 12/23/2020 1:44:00 AM yes; just beautiful the poem is; I enjoyed this really /// Login to Reply Gayle Rodd Date: 12/23/2020 2:52:00 AM Thanks so much!

Joanna Daniel Date: 12/17/2020 10:21:00 PM Simple yet beautiful write, Gayle, touching:) Login to Reply Gayle Rodd Date: 12/18/2020 8:49:00 AM Thank you Jo

Victor Buhagiar Date: 12/15/2020 10:35:00 PM What a pity you stopped writing. Hope to see you here once again tough things have changed. ~~ Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 10/25/2020 1:43:00 PM Hey long time no see.. hope you are well Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/10/2020 3:45:00 PM this is so adorable, Gayle. I love this Login to Reply

Running Wolves Date: 12/8/2019 2:49:00 PM This is incredibly fantastic Login to Reply

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 5/28/2019 6:45:00 AM Beautiful ... Login to Reply Gayle Rodd Date: 5/31/2019 5:48:00 PM Thanks so much

Ricky Muse Date: 12/9/2018 9:09:00 AM This poem covers a lot of ground. Very nice. Login to Reply

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 11/2/2018 6:48:00 AM A really super piece on the eyes Gayle, lovely rhyme and flow too. Superb!! Login to Reply Gayle Rodd Date: 11/2/2018 7:29:00 PM Thanks for readi.ng ;)

Aniruddha Pathak Date: 9/17/2018 6:03:00 AM Mine are eyes That can’t disguise Yes indeed eyes that disguise are no eyes, and you have eyes that knows. I liked the poem Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 9/10/2018 2:21:00 AM You have eyes for eyes, Gayle! A poem wrapped in simple words, and that makes it even more delightful. Regards // paul Login to Reply

Charles Messina Date: 8/29/2018 6:47:00 PM Beautiful love poem you’ve written, Gayle. Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. Very well done...warm wishes...Charlie:) Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/20/2018 8:48:00 PM They say that if you look at the eyes you can catch a glimpse of the soul. I think this is so true. Wonderful feeling to be able to look into the eyes of someone you love. There is no greater feeling, I have enjoyed your poem this evening Gayle. thank you for sharing Login to Reply Gayle Rodd Date: 7/20/2018 9:46:00 PM Thank you so much!

Robert Lindley Date: 7/20/2018 1:30:00 AM Beautifully creative and delightful poem to read my friend. Perfect ending for such an uplifting and well crafted piece! A fav... Login to Reply Gayle Rodd Date: 7/20/2018 8:31:00 AM Thank you Robert :)

Maria Williams Date: 7/19/2018 10:50:00 PM How beautiful, I love the way you have written this. A Fave for me....Maria hugs Login to Reply Gayle Rodd Date: 7/20/2018 8:32:00 AM Thank you Maria!

Michael Wegman Date: 7/19/2018 7:12:00 PM How wonderful! And clever. Thank you, this made me smile big! The ayes have it! This one’s a keeper! Be blessed! M Login to Reply Gayle Rodd Date: 7/19/2018 9:36:00 PM Thank you kind sir!

Pat Adams Date: 7/4/2018 5:38:00 PM The word play title, the very good rhyme and a sweet surprising ending. I love it! A FAV for me!!...........Pat Login to Reply Gayle Rodd Date: 7/19/2018 9:36:00 PM Thx Pat

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/2/2018 8:50:00 AM Enjoyable to rad again. Clever play on words with the title. Login to Reply Gayle Rodd Date: 7/20/2018 8:32:00 AM thank you Richard

Lyric Man Date: 6/8/2018 5:25:00 AM Gayle, oh my gosh.. your fun, catchy poem flipped into a lovely romantic write in three lines.. I love it! Login to Reply Gayle Rodd Date: 6/8/2018 7:35:00 AM Thanks for reading, Chance :)

Barbara Barry-Nishanian Date: 5/2/2018 1:52:00 PM It is not corny!!! Switch it up again. Gotta go read what I've missed. Enjoyed this one...cause I get really corny in my writes. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/1/2018 12:14:00 AM This is both clever and sweet. I enjoyed your poem Gayle. Take care Richard. Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 3/20/2018 7:45:00 AM This is adorable, delightful and as cute as can be. I enjoyed it all, beginning with the title until the last word. It could easily be memorized by any age group and serve as a sing-along or parent to child, not just romantic love (my mind did go there just now). I truly fun poem. All the best ... CayCay Login to Reply Gayle Rodd Date: 3/20/2018 6:06:00 PM Thx CayCay. It's a little 'corny' but I gotta switch things up once in a while ;)

John Gondolf Date: 3/18/2018 12:26:00 PM Through the eyes of this reader your poem is a beautiful tribute to the one you love. Nicely written, Gayle. John Login to Reply Gayle Rodd Date: 3/18/2018 7:51:00 PM Thank you John

FJ Thomas Date: 3/18/2018 8:46:00 AM Love the title and poem Gayle! You've covered all bases. Login to Reply Gayle Rodd Date: 3/18/2018 11:39:00 AM thx for reading!

Harriet Shea Date: 3/11/2018 5:39:00 PM It is all in the eyes. I always look in the eyes of those I talk to. Mirror to the soul. Observation is very important in the life we live Gayle.. Derena Login to Reply Gayle Rodd Date: 3/18/2018 11:40:00 AM I agree. thank you for taking the time to read :)

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