Gayle Rodd Poet Rhyme

The Eyes Have It

Some are ever hollow
Some are full of lies
Some are evil; menacing
Some are old and wise

Some are full of mischief
Some are full of fear
Some are deep and soulful
Others full of tears

Some are ever roving
Some are ever cold
Some are ever staring
Some are even rolled!

Some are ever flirting
Some are green or blue
Mine are eyes 
That can’t disguise
The love they hold for you

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Mahtab Bangalee December 23, 2020 at 1:44 AM yes; just beautiful the poem is; I enjoyed this really /// Gayle Rodd December 23, 2020 at 2:52 AM Thanks so much!

Joanna Daniel December 17, 2020 at 10:21 PM Simple yet beautiful write, Gayle, touching:) Gayle Rodd December 18, 2020 at 8:49 AM Thank you Jo

Victor Buhagiar December 15, 2020 at 10:35 PM What a pity you stopped writing. Hope to see you here once again tough things have changed. ~~

Silent One October 25, 2020 at 1:43 PM Hey long time no see.. hope you are well

Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2020 at 3:45 PM this is so adorable, Gayle. I love this

Running Wolves December 8, 2019 at 2:49 PM This is incredibly fantastic

Kai Michael Neumann May 28, 2019 at 6:45 AM Beautiful ... Gayle Rodd May 31, 2019 at 5:48 PM Thanks so much

Richard Evans December 9, 2018 at 9:09 AM This poem covers a lot of ground. Very nice.

Gordon Mcconnell November 2, 2018 at 6:48 AM A really super piece on the eyes Gayle, lovely rhyme and flow too. Superb!! Gayle Rodd November 2, 2018 at 7:29 PM Thanks for readi.ng ;)

Aniruddha Pathak September 17, 2018 at 6:03 AM Mine are eyes That can’t disguise Yes indeed eyes that disguise are no eyes, and you have eyes that knows. I liked the poem

Paul Callus September 10, 2018 at 2:21 AM You have eyes for eyes, Gayle! A poem wrapped in simple words, and that makes it even more delightful. Regards // paul

Charles Messina August 29, 2018 at 6:47 PM Beautiful love poem you’ve written, Gayle. Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. Very well done...warm wishes...Charlie:)

Mystic Rose Rose July 20, 2018 at 8:48 PM They say that if you look at the eyes you can catch a glimpse of the soul. I think this is so true. Wonderful feeling to be able to look into the eyes of someone you love. There is no greater feeling, I have enjoyed your poem this evening Gayle. thank you for sharing Gayle Rodd July 20, 2018 at 9:46 PM Thank you so much!

Robert Lindley July 20, 2018 at 1:30 AM Beautifully creative and delightful poem to read my friend. Perfect ending for such an uplifting and well crafted piece! A fav... Gayle Rodd July 20, 2018 at 8:31 AM Thank you Robert :)

Maria Williams July 19, 2018 at 10:50 PM How beautiful, I love the way you have written this. A Fave for me....Maria hugs Gayle Rodd July 20, 2018 at 8:32 AM Thank you Maria!

Michael Wegman July 19, 2018 at 7:12 PM How wonderful! And clever. Thank you, this made me smile big! The ayes have it! This one’s a keeper! Be blessed! M Gayle Rodd July 19, 2018 at 9:36 PM Thank you kind sir!

Pat Adams July 4, 2018 at 5:38 PM The word play title, the very good rhyme and a sweet surprising ending. I love it! A FAV for me!!...........Pat Gayle Rodd July 19, 2018 at 9:36 PM Thx Pat

Richard Lamoureux July 2, 2018 at 8:50 AM Enjoyable to rad again. Clever play on words with the title. Gayle Rodd July 20, 2018 at 8:32 AM thank you Richard

Lyric Man June 8, 2018 at 5:25 AM Gayle, oh my gosh.. your fun, catchy poem flipped into a lovely romantic write in three lines.. I love it! Gayle Rodd June 8, 2018 at 7:35 AM Thanks for reading, Chance :)

Barbara Barry-Nishanian May 2, 2018 at 1:52 PM It is not corny!!! Switch it up again. Gotta go read what I've missed. Enjoyed this one...cause I get really corny in my writes.

Richard Lamoureux May 1, 2018 at 12:14 AM This is both clever and sweet. I enjoyed your poem Gayle. Take care Richard.

CayCay Godwin March 20, 2018 at 7:45 AM This is adorable, delightful and as cute as can be. I enjoyed it all, beginning with the title until the last word. It could easily be memorized by any age group and serve as a sing-along or parent to child, not just romantic love (my mind did go there just now). I truly fun poem. All the best ... CayCay Gayle Rodd March 20, 2018 at 6:06 PM Thx CayCay. It's a little 'corny' but I gotta switch things up once in a while ;)

John Gondolf March 18, 2018 at 12:26 PM Through the eyes of this reader your poem is a beautiful tribute to the one you love. Nicely written, Gayle. John Gayle Rodd March 18, 2018 at 7:51 PM Thank you John

FJ Thomas March 18, 2018 at 8:46 AM Love the title and poem Gayle! You've covered all bases. Gayle Rodd March 18, 2018 at 11:39 AM thx for reading!

Harriet Shea March 11, 2018 at 5:39 PM It is all in the eyes. I always look in the eyes of those I talk to. Mirror to the soul. Observation is very important in the life we live Gayle.. Derena Gayle Rodd March 18, 2018 at 11:40 AM I agree. thank you for taking the time to read :)

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