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The Eyes

I like em'
Thick in the thighs,
the apple bottom.
I like those
Passionate eyes 
that can see through lies.
Fearless, down for whatever,
no matter the endeavor.

Jared Pickett
3/28/2010
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Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/10/2010 10:10:00 PM Haha. it's called Eyes and you are talking about her thighs right off! Very revealing about you! I love the eyes as a favorite feature of a person too. Let me go read the next part! This is good writing, Jared. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 3/31/2010 12:22:00 AM You like those passionate eyes..yes eyes are truth revealers I guess..and yes some eyes can see a person deeper than others..Fearless-down for whatever,,for good and bad,for thick and thin..always there..nice thoughts here..well done..Charma Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/30/2010 4:09:00 PM A man after my own heart .. the eyes have it all the time... passionate eyes that can see through lies.. neat statement here my Lone Wolf friend.. luv.. "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/29/2010 6:27:00 AM I especially like the last four lines.Sara Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/28/2010 6:55:00 PM This is a great write, Jared! Those "passionate eyes" will see the truth every time. And I admire her "fearless" quality, too. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Tim Ryerson Date: 3/28/2010 5:49:00 PM Love those 'Passionate eyes' and all the other body parts mentioned too!... Very cool poem, Jared - Tim Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 3/28/2010 4:56:00 PM having a good day it seems!! Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 3/28/2010 4:53:00 PM Pretty unique poem here Jared. I like the style and matter. Cool my friend! -Robert Login to Reply