The Eyes

I like em'
Thick in the thighs,
the apple bottom.
I like those
Passionate eyes 
that can see through lies.
Fearless, down for whatever,
no matter the endeavor.

Jared Pickett
3/28/2010
Asavvy1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 10:10 PM
Haha. it's called Eyes and you are talking about her thighs right off! Very revealing about you! I love the eyes as a favorite feature of a person too. Let me go read the next part! This is good writing, Jared. Luv, Andrea
Chircop Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 12:22 AM
You like those passionate eyes..yes eyes are truth revealers I guess..and yes some eyes can see a person deeper than others..Fearless-down for whatever,,for good and bad,for thick and thin..always there..nice thoughts here..well done..Charma
Sweetheart Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 4:09 PM
A man after my own heart .. the eyes have it all the time... passionate eyes that can see through lies.. neat statement here my Lone Wolf friend.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
Kendrick Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 6:27 AM
I especially like the last four lines.Sara
Devonshire Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 6:55 PM
This is a great write, Jared! Those "passionate eyes" will see the truth every time. And I admire her "fearless" quality, too. Love, Carolyn
Ryerson Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 5:49 PM
Love those 'Passionate eyes' and all the other body parts mentioned too!... Very cool poem, Jared - Tim
Culverhouse Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 4:56 PM
having a good day it seems!!
Dufresne Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 4:53 PM
Pretty unique poem here Jared. I like the style and matter. Cool my friend! -Robert
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