The Extra Mile

and when she saw that vagrant man the gears all clicked; she had a plan to share his footsteps for a span and then as was her style thinking this life was his to choose not being one to disabuse I watched her buy some brand new shoes to go the extra mile she walked beside, but what’s a shame she didn’t even get his name close she was, yes, close she came yet missed it all the while
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Miller Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 7:59 AM
Excellent flow and rhyme, great poem; congratulations.
Merryman Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 1:54 PM
A thought provoking poem, Jeff! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 3:07 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Charles' contest. Way to go. Sara
Alex Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 6:17 AM
Style, mile, while... great rhyme. Congratulations!
Messina Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 5:08 AM
Great rhythm and flow, Jeff. Love the poem! Congratulations on your win! Charlie
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