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The Extra Mile

and when she saw that vagrant man the gears all clicked; she had a plan to share his footsteps for a span and then as was her style thinking this life was his to choose not being one to disabuse I watched her buy some brand new shoes to go the extra mile she walked beside, but what’s a shame she didn’t even get his name close she was, yes, close she came yet missed it all the while

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Date: 9/1/2023 7:59:00 AM
Excellent flow and rhyme, great poem; congratulations.
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Date: 8/30/2023 1:54:00 PM
A thought provoking poem, Jeff! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/30/2023 3:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Charles' contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 8/29/2023 6:17:00 AM
Style, mile, while... great rhyme. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/29/2023 5:08:00 AM
Great rhythm and flow, Jeff. Love the poem! Congratulations on your win! Charlie
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