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The Extra Mile Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Charles Messina, Date written: 07/24/2023

The Extra Mile

Life's slings and arrows, tough to bear. 
    Oh, it's quite a cruel world out there. 
    The needy are suffering; it's not fair. 

                     If I could help them all, I would. 
  
         Helping desperate people out. 
          Is what kindness is all about. 
          Infinitely rewarding, no doubt. 

                      It surely makes one feel good! 

         I sometimes go the extra mile. 
         To make their day worthwhile. 
        Seeing my efforts bring a smile... 

                      Puts me in a very good mood! 
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Miller Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 3:56 AM
Certainly put me in a good mood; congratulations.
Ibeh Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 5:10 AM
Thank you very much, Terry:-)
Merryman Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 1:42 PM
You started off on a sad note but ended with hope! An excellent write, Edward! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
Ibeh Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 1:46 PM
Thank you very much, Kim:-)
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 3:02 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Charles' contest. Way to go. Sara
Ibeh Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 1:45 PM
Thank you very much, Sara:-)
Canerdy Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 7:07 AM
You're right, Edward. Though we can't help all, we CAN help some. CONGRATS on your win! Janice
Ibeh Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 1:40 PM
Thank you so much, Janice:-)
Alex Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 6:12 AM
Great rhyming. Very powerful writing. Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 1:39 PM
Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)
Messina Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 4:03 AM
Edward, reading this...put me in a VERY good mood. Fantastic write, My friend. Congratulations on your top win! Charlie
Ibeh Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 5:19 AM
Thank you very much for the placement, feedback and congratulations, Charles:-) Most obliged.
Pandit Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 3:50 PM
Yes it's a cruel world out there--and people are suffering. Kindness exudes through your words of goodwill my friend. Best to you for a top win.
Ibeh Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 4:31 AM
Thank you, Vijay:-) I appreciate the vote of confidence, my friend.
Volumes Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 1:16 PM
Your poem is great, you hit a home run with this one, it's good for a win. Well done my friend.
Ibeh Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 4:31 AM
Thank you so much, SV:-)
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