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The Exes

pussy galore it seems these damn cats keep clawing at my old screen door

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/15/2009 4:53:00 PM

Interesting Haiku. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/21/2009 10:57:00 PM

lovely -this made me laugh--well penned as always kid--charma

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 5/17/2009 12:31:00 PM

wait, so we're not talking about cats here? I'm with Nadia, pets are adorable. Not sure what you mean by 'exes' never heard that word before (sarcasm translates very poorly in a PS comment huh). Who would have thought haiku's were supposed to be about nature, in the forms page it says so anyway:).

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 5/14/2009 8:01:00 AM

Lovely poetry... by the way pets are adorable. i wish you all the best.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/13/2009 2:15:00 PM

Wildly funny! Great haiku, Brian!

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/13/2009 12:59:00 PM

LOL...Brain you are a trip..you know that first line was for shock and awe.....I still think this entire piece is a metaphor for those who want to get back in .....brilliant haiku

Charlene Bird

Date: 5/13/2009 12:36:00 PM

Interesitng, yet humorous Brian, isn't that the way it always goes, they want back in. I always enjoy reading your work, this one is definitely has a different flavor. Check your soup mail friend.