The Exes

pussy galore it
seems these damn cats keep clawing
at my old screen door
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 4:53 PM
Interesting Haiku. Sara
Chircop Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 10:57 PM
lovely -this made me laugh--well penned as always kid--charma
Dvorkis Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 12:31 PM
wait, so we're not talking about cats here? I'm with Nadia, pets are adorable. Not sure what you mean by 'exes' never heard that word before (sarcasm translates very poorly in a PS comment huh). Who would have thought haiku's were supposed to be about nature, in the forms page it says so anyway:).
Shahwan Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 8:01 AM
Lovely poetry... by the way pets are adorable. i wish you all the best.
Devonshire Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 2:15 PM
Wildly funny! Great haiku, Brian!
Higgins Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 12:59 PM
LOL...Brain you are a trip..you know that first line was for shock and awe.....I still think this entire piece is a metaphor for those who want to get back in .....brilliant haiku
Bird Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 12:36 PM
Interesitng, yet humorous Brian, isn't that the way it always goes, they want back in. I always enjoy reading your work, this one is definitely has a different flavor. Check your soup mail friend.
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