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Words written in scrambled lines lines filled with words words that determined my fate fate of my grade. A war that began 13 weeks ago with hope and nothing but hope we hoped the river to cross bore a smile not cross there is nothing false about hope right? Words written in scrambled lines lines hidden by the brownish red of the cover lines hidden in between words lines that tested my faith and won. Here comes he, the man with the golden pen searching for lines, scrambled lines lines hidden beyond human sight but he, he that bore the golden pen was not human. A war that began 13 weeks ago just ended for he, he whose line was found with lines scrambled beyond recognition lines filled with words words that sealed his fate. The man with the golden pen walked towards me my mind beat, my heart went blank he yielded in his hands power to write lines scrambled lines that could end this war the war that began 13 weeks ago. My lines found, my fate sealed but the truth still sets free "Sir i wrote these lines" truly the truth still sets free free from the end of the war. How can a man wish for his war to not end but wait to the last minute, when it comes to a dead-end they said only the dead have seen the end of war well, i have seen the end of war the question is will i live again?

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Date: 9/26/2016 2:54:00 PM
Somandina, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/23/2016 11:40:00 AM
Somadina, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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