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The Essence of Soft Shadows The essence of soft shadows on the wall that shelters where we'll rest when we are gone, where light flows in to grace the marble hall and seasons can be seen with each new dawn... Will speak to us of earthly joys we knew... like sunny rays or raindrops on the glass; and essence of soft shadows will come through with visions of blue sky, green trees, and grass. The essence of soft shadows will sweep in to touch our names in gold there placed to see. And we will feel quintessence there within of earthy warmth and sites that used to be. The essence of soft shadows here on Earth do not exist when cast by Heaven's ray; where there, our souls, in process of rebirth, will watch our borrowed shells slowly decay. And there above, our love will glow once more. The essence of soft shadows on our souls will fade away to shine forevermore replaced by endless light that death extols. May 10, 2018 ~1st Place Contest: The Essence of Soft Shadows Sponsor: John Lawless Judged: 05/18/2018

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Date: 5/19/2018 9:19:00 PM
Awesome rhythm, Sandra. Congrats on your silver medal win. Well done.
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Date: 5/19/2018 3:20:00 PM
Well done, Sandra,, .....you have taken the required line to a top level !! And also, while I'm here, I am so sorry to hear you have had damage and so many problems due to the tornado in New York ! Hope you are recovering and normal life will return soon. :) Hugs!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/22/2018 5:01:00 PM
Thank you very much, Carrie, for your visit and supportive comments on my poem, as well as our tornado damages. It's been tough. Still very much involved with repairs and clean up along with so many others in our area. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/19/2018 1:33:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful and serene. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/18/2018 6:11:00 PM
WOW....Sandra, so many wonderful poetic and spiritual touches herein. The repetition flowed seamlessly, along with the softy soothing flow and gentle rhyme. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 5/11/2018 12:06:00 AM
So beautiful, Mrs Sandra. I love the spirituality of it. It leaves the reader with a sense of peace. Just splendid! So far. this one is my favorite:) Good luck! Happy Mother's Day sweet lady.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/12/2018 6:24:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel, for your visit and very supportive comment on this poem. I am pleased that you found it peaceful. Thank you so much for the nice 'Happy Mother's Day' wishes! Much appreciated! Sandra

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