The Escape Artist

The Escape Artist

December 2, 2010 at 2:48am by Jeromy Zimmer(A.K.A inVad3R, A.K.A Jeremy)

Creating his world through the eyes of a non existent creature.
 
Wondering to himself, is this my only feature?
 
A solemn night alone, not lonely nor solid.
 
A re-awakening of a jester, the symptoms will soon fester.
 
With only his wits about him.
 
A justified paradox of reactability,
 
the numbers he manifested create only distorted tranquility.
 
Finally realizing the importance of what he did not make happen.
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January 13, 2014 at 12:35 PM
Hi Jeromy, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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January 13, 2014 at 4:55 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Jeromy- I choose your first poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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January 13, 2014 at 3:31 AM
oooo, I love the title Jeromy, like a deep and epic place of tranquility. I'm still trying to visualize the distorted tranquil feel. ..., well expressed.... , I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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