The Enemy Inside

You tell me I’m not good enough, 
And that I’ll never be. 
All my talents fall too short,
For anyone to see.
You tell me I’m too stuck inside,
A mind filled with clutter.
No one wants to be with me,
My life is in the gutter.
So quick are you to find my faults,
Mistakes you don’t forget.
My life goals unattainable,
That’s your highest bet.
To remove you from my life,
Would be the correction.
The problem with that theory,
Is you’re my reflection.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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October 14, 2015 at 10:25 PM
KL Williams, Congratulations on your awesome win. SKAT :)
A. Sharma Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 11:51 PM
Wonderful take on the theme KL with this superb winning write! Big congrats!
Tunick Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 10:09 PM
Wonderfully wonderfully insightful and cleverly delivered.
Williams Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 6:35 PM
Thank you! That means a lot. :)
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