Jayne Eggins Poet Rhyme

The End

The angels in my night
have stilled their dance,
with the thought of you
and her, I lay on my lance 

the eventide has lost
its sparkle and shine,
I sit in the darkness
and my soul does pine 

the flowers are things
just growing in the ground,
their beauty is lost 
it’s become quite profound

losing touch with the world
I sit on a highway of hell,
and death for me now
would not be a hard sell

this distance is growing
I am fading away,
I have to end this now
before I finish this day

I deleted your number
off my phone,
I erased your face
now I am alone 

forgetting caresses 
while you held me near,
negating the kisses
when you called me dear 

now I wish you happiness
and a life full of blessings,
but right now my heart
is stretched and its stressing

I can’t be your friend
until this hole is filled,
and I don’t think the Doc'
has a magical pill 

wait for the moon
to spill with a light,
telling you I've returned
to spectacular heights

I will hold our memory
in a secret book,
and every now and then
I shall sneak a look...

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Mark Goodson February 23, 2014 at 9:19 AM Ships which have parted for other ports, with the maybe of passing upon the high seas, will blow there horns as a sign of "I remember you." Then in the passing, they steer for opposite shores as time and distance increases to see never the more. Jayne, You have written a lovely piece- one which perhaps all, but I wish for no one to recall. Jayne Eggins February 23, 2014 at 9:31 AM Mark, I hope with the easing of the pain, we can smile when we meet again...thanks for the read I really appreciate it love Jayne x

Mark Goodson February 23, 2014 at 9:18 AM Ships which have parted for other ports, with the maybe of passing upon the high seas, will blow there horns as a sign of "I remember you." Then in the passing, they steer for opposite shores a time and distance increases to see never the more. Jayne, You have written a lovely piece- one which perhaps all, but I wish for one one to recall.

David Williams February 18, 2014 at 5:29 AM Jayne an excellent read, sadness has brought out great poetry from you....David Jayne Eggins February 22, 2014 at 4:39 AM Someone else said a similar thing to me the other day, maybe it has eh ? glad you enjoyed the read thanks for stopping by I appreciate it ...love Jayne xxx

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri February 17, 2014 at 1:28 PM A gorgeous brill lyrical jilted love poem! Thumbs up for the rhymin flow. Do pls review my latest poem. Jayne Eggins February 22, 2014 at 4:39 AM Awww thank you so very happy you liked this one I appreciate the read and comment love Jayne xxx

Tim Smith February 15, 2014 at 9:20 AM This is magnificent Jayne...Keep moving forward. Before you know it there will be someone trying to fill that void.....Hugs Tim Jayne Eggins February 22, 2014 at 4:37 AM Thanks Tim, we can only move forward eh ? I am glad you liked it love Jayne x

Sara Kendrick February 15, 2014 at 8:48 AM Enjoyed your memory lane..Great work..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara Jayne Eggins February 22, 2014 at 4:36 AM Thanks for the read and the visit Sara I really appreciated it love Jayne xxx