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The End

The angels in my night have stilled their dance, with the thought of you and her, I lay on my lance the eventide has lost its sparkle and shine, I sit in the darkness and my soul does pine the flowers are things just growing in the ground, their beauty is lost it’s become quite profound losing touch with the world I sit on a highway of hell, and death for me now would not be a hard sell this distance is growing I am fading away, I have to end this now before I finish this day I deleted your number off my phone, I erased your face now I am alone forgetting caresses while you held me near, negating the kisses when you called me dear now I wish you happiness and a life full of blessings, but right now my heart is stretched and its stressing I can’t be your friend until this hole is filled, and I don’t think the Doc' has a magical pill wait for the moon to spill with a light, telling you I've returned to spectacular heights I will hold our memory in a secret book, and every now and then I shall sneak a look...

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Date: 2/23/2014 9:19:00 AM
Ships which have parted for other ports, with the maybe of passing upon the high seas, will blow there horns as a sign of "I remember you." Then in the passing, they steer for opposite shores as time and distance increases to see never the more. Jayne, You have written a lovely piece- one which perhaps all, but I wish for no one to recall.
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 2/23/2014 9:31:00 AM
Mark, I hope with the easing of the pain, we can smile when we meet again...thanks for the read I really appreciate it love Jayne x
Date: 2/23/2014 9:18:00 AM
Ships which have parted for other ports, with the maybe of passing upon the high seas, will blow there horns as a sign of "I remember you." Then in the passing, they steer for opposite shores a time and distance increases to see never the more. Jayne, You have written a lovely piece- one which perhaps all, but I wish for one one to recall.
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Date: 2/18/2014 5:29:00 AM
Jayne an excellent read, sadness has brought out great poetry from you....David
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 2/22/2014 4:39:00 AM
Someone else said a similar thing to me the other day, maybe it has eh ? glad you enjoyed the read thanks for stopping by I appreciate it ...love Jayne xxx
Date: 2/17/2014 1:28:00 PM
A gorgeous brill lyrical jilted love poem! Thumbs up for the rhymin flow. Do pls review my latest poem.
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 2/22/2014 4:39:00 AM
Awww thank you so very happy you liked this one I appreciate the read and comment love Jayne xxx
Date: 2/15/2014 9:20:00 AM
This is magnificent Jayne...Keep moving forward. Before you know it there will be someone trying to fill that void.....Hugs Tim
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 2/22/2014 4:37:00 AM
Thanks Tim, we can only move forward eh ? I am glad you liked it love Jayne x
Date: 2/15/2014 8:48:00 AM
Enjoyed your memory lane..Great work..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 2/22/2014 4:36:00 AM
Thanks for the read and the visit Sara I really appreciated it love Jayne xxx

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