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dissillisioned thoughts will cover and rise darkness and death will fill our eyes we will lose and they shall abuse take what we have and find what we lose they will lie and con and soon we will find love is gone leaving us with no reason to carry on the sun wont fall at the break of dawn the grass wont grow and the flowers wont bloom life as we know it will create its own doom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/13/2011 6:41:00 PM
Lovely expressions quite thoughtful on the end, kris
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Date: 7/13/2011 2:58:00 PM
like this poem very dramatic from beginning to end enjoy the usage of intense words poem is awesome
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Date: 7/13/2011 4:28:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Kris. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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