The End

Nobody know this pain
having to let go
someone that you thought were your world
 Giving up 
after trying to make work
asking myself why did I even try
 Shooting for the stars
only to crash land where it all began
the blueprints were full of errors
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 2, 2011 at 12:49 PM
Nice poem...And know that there's always hope...Jimmy
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