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The End

I feel like it's the end of my life, As I take this knife close to my wrist, I think why, why do I do this? I've got to do this! No time to waist. As I draw the knife to my flesh, I cut slowly, moving the knife back and forth. As blood comes to the surface, My pain slows down, the pain and agony. [Written at 13 years old]

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/30/2010 8:00:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creative write tonight.. have fun on the Poetry Soup site with luv..
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Date: 12/30/2010 3:02:00 PM
Kalie, I began reading and was scared, but as I read on I realized the purpose of this was pure catharsis. Very good.
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Date: 12/30/2010 3:34:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kalie. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/29/2010 3:39:00 PM
Very touching and moving write at the age of 13, I can surmise what would have befallen that led her to do that, Kalie
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Date: 12/29/2010 2:41:00 PM
wow my friend this is very strong in meanings here u ok my friend
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