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I sat in the dirt next to a healthy stream. The water gently rolled over the rocks and stones. I sat and smiled back with my missing teeth, and my broken bones.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 12/4/2024 8:19:00 AM
You found the beauty in the priceless things that cost nothing. Count it all joy when trials come are way.
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Date: 12/2/2024 11:00:00 AM
Hello Michael Huch, It sounds like a very bad fall. being by the water will be soothing for you. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 10/26/2024 7:00:00 PM
Intriguing. What accident occurred? I enjoyed the suspense in your poem.
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