The End


I sat in the dirt next to a healthy stream.
The water gently rolled over the rocks and stones.
I sat and smiled back with my missing teeth,
 and my broken bones.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Beck Avatar
December 4, 2024 at 8:19 AM
You found the beauty in the priceless things that cost nothing. Count it all joy when trials come are way.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 2, 2024 at 11:00 AM
Hello Michael Huch, It sounds like a very bad fall. being by the water will be soothing for you. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Greenhough Avatar
October 26, 2024 at 7:00 PM
Intriguing. What accident occurred? I enjoyed the suspense in your poem.
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