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For: Search That Bus Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Miranda Hawley

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The Empty Bus

The big yellow bus has disgorged
          it's final school student;
the driver searches empty seats
          to find what has been forgotten,
or hidden from prying eyes~
          secrets of teenage affairs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Greenhough Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 12:00 PM
I found this poem interesting. I never rode the bus. Kids walked when I went.. dating myself again. So secrets are really left in the bus. This poem is cute and informative.
Achara Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 12:10 PM
Thank you.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 5:00 PM
Very nice!
Achara Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 6:30 PM
Thank you.
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