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For: Search That Bus Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Miranda Hawley

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The big yellow bus has disgorged it's final school student; the driver searches empty seats to find what has been forgotten, or hidden from prying eyes~ secrets of teenage affairs.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 3/24/2024 12:00:00 PM
I found this poem interesting. I never rode the bus. Kids walked when I went.. dating myself again. So secrets are really left in the bus. This poem is cute and informative.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 3/24/2024 12:10:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/23/2024 5:00:00 PM
Very nice!
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Chetta Achara
Date: 3/23/2024 6:30:00 PM
Thank you.

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