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The Empty Bird's Nest

the empty bird’s nest
          fell neatly upon the ground
                   after life began

Heidi Sands

11/16/17

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MD Johnson

Date: 12/22/2017 9:18:00 AM

Another nice one. Really enjoy reading your writes.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/22/2017 9:23:00 AM

I am happy to hear that. Thank you. I am just now reading some of your excellent - well written poems and enjoy them as well :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/19/2017 9:18:00 PM

Now this is gorgeous! Awesomeness :) hugs and smiles :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/20/2017 6:45:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comment Akkina! It is nice to see you back :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/17/2017 8:09:00 PM

impressive 'ku, heidi.. enjoyed the juxta in the end..huggs!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/18/2017 6:56:00 AM

Thank you Nette :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/17/2017 4:10:00 PM

I find haiku to be difficult, you seem to have got the handle on it.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/17/2017 4:21:00 PM

Thank you Richard. I have done some, but not that many, so I come back to them to do sometimes :) I appreciate your visit and comment.

Joseph May

Date: 11/17/2017 2:29:00 PM

Very nice haiku Heidi...best wishes

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/17/2017 3:27:00 PM

Thank you Joseph :)

Silent One

Date: 11/17/2017 12:37:00 PM

Fledglings always fly away from the nest.. Beautiful thought and a great haiku..

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/17/2017 3:27:00 PM

Thank you Silent One :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/17/2017 4:22:00 AM

This is gorgeous! You have enlightened my morning by your tender words of wonderment my friend! I love birds too, but never get to see many more than sparrows, robins, and black birds (Oh and the occasional hawk)! I forgot, we do see cardinals too! I hear the owls, but never see them! Oh your write is very wondrous Heidi! You have delighted me by your soft words of merriment that I am enthralled by its splendor! What Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/17/2017 7:43:00 AM

Thank you for your kind feedback. Your comments are so positive and enjoyable to read. Yes..the birds are so nice to see. I am still waiting for winter birds to show up. I appreciate your comment. I hope you have fun seeing those birds you mentioned! Have a great day. :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/16/2017 9:38:00 PM

A wonderful haiku Heidi! Enjoyed!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/17/2017 7:38:00 AM

Thank you Susan ! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/16/2017 2:12:00 PM

- Jepp ... well done, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/16/2017 2:31:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/16/2017 11:52:00 AM

Hi Heidi, A very sweet Haiku. We both love birds!! Happy Thursday!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/16/2017 12:12:00 PM

Thank you Mike. Yes, I love the birds :) That's great you do too. Happy Thursday!

Probir Gupta

Date: 11/16/2017 11:26:00 AM

A wonderful Haiku ...

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/16/2017 11:37:00 AM

Thank you Probir :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/16/2017 11:24:00 AM

So true--beautifully captured--Kudos friend, for a lovely poem!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/16/2017 11:37:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. We were on the same wavelength. Your nice Haiku was like the perfect beginning to this one I had written. I appreciate your kind comment and prompt to put this one in. :)

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