The Empty

THE EMPTY by Mark Miller © 11/13/2013 Memory's memento play of Rhymes captor performance Fleeting feelings denature above Father's absent surrogate running Vanity around vacuous wander While child sinks through ocean Hole couch left home sick silence While twilight Zone features Searling Bleak departure into rabid paranormal Shaking development of altered persona Into character model moles depersonal Reasons torn torture in acid base seduction Stirred and poised as serpents coil claw Polarized reverence never reaching adolescence

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/27/2018 1:36:00 PM

Heartbreaking, really...So often we read of those who overcame impossible obstacles. But we forget how many simply never had a chance...Thank you for a poem from the heart. Best wishes, Gershon

Lewis Raynes

Date: 2/25/2018 9:38:00 PM

a hard situation Mark, the desperation, the turmoil, good writing

Mark Miller

Date: 2/25/2018 7:42:00 PM

This one's a sad one and was not going to place it. I was the eldest. Raised the family while mom and dad fought, though I was never a bad kid. Divorce left me completely alienated and alone without anyone to listen to me. So drugs and alcohol became negative distractions to painful existence.If this can help one kid, then all my work is worth more than all the gold on earth.