The Emptied Written by Mrs Yolanda Joy Nicholsen

My mind hungered the untimeliness 
of shattered existence above all grave 
battered thoughts sullen whispers quiet 
hushes I employed to write to empty 

oneself into an invisible crowded realm 
ecstasy of the soul craving my hearts 
glow the brilliant hue that send signals 
down my spine as if I'd swallowed the sun 

capturing necessity illuminating fields 
of joy my bones cringed beneath my flesh 
holding my pen I'd write of sadness madness 
courage and mirth a rapture awaiting newness 

fanatically so the meeting of the minds shall 
gather in spite my absence an yet I invited 
myself deep inside criticism once again
vaguely I'd remember a time of calm 

creating prose and song shaking off
writers block like a bad poisoning 
chiseling away at a masterpiece hidden
within the braising wall I'd cleverly built

around myself protecting my craft my work
exposing my scars revealing emptiness
very closely dancing with insanity uncertainty
merely unfolding leaf's binderies of truth of love

Written by Mrs Yolanda Joy Nicholsen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Horsman Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 6:49 PM
Poetry so deep, Poetry of conscience someone hurt so deeply, Been there Yolanda, you can fight this. you have poetry as your weapon, and your shield use them. Harry.
Nicholsen Avatar
January 27, 2023 at 1:33 AM
Thanks a bunch Harry sending big hugs.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 12:49 PM
WOW!!! What a write. Wish you had Soup Mail. I do. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Nicholsen Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 4:25 AM
Thank you very much sending hugs
Wolf Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 7:44 PM
Alan Ginsberg and the stream of consciousness comes to mind... Explorations of the vagaries and vicissitudes of being. ~ Oneness, gw
Nicholsen Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 4:24 AM
Thanks Alan many blessings
Daniel Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 7:38 AM
Very deep and unique style of writing, Yolanda:) I love your name:)
Nicholsen Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 4:24 AM
thanks a bunch sending hugs
Romios Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 6:34 AM
Yolanda, you are something special. You actually reveal yourself. Amazing! Thanks for writing beyond flowers and cats.that’s fine…but I want to know poets. You do that in totality. I see you have no soup mail. That’s OK. I do.do write me anytime.p,ease? Love, Panagiota Love, Panagiota
Nicholsen Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 4:24 AM
Thank you kindly many blessings
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