The Emerald, Enchanted Pond

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12/10/2023 We were so excited and how we waited so as kids, For the emerald liquid to turn immediately to hard ice. Which, one day, it so thrillingly, magically, lovingly,did. I ran.with heart pouding and aglow into my house. How come I was such a wild child in a frenetic state of hurry? Why to find my precious,gleaming figure skates, of course! The luminous, beloved, pond you must know.. Was but four feet from our white back door! And,we ran to the pomd and brushed off her powered snow. I saw my face in it, as I delicately touched the pond’s face, She, my ice enchantress, smiled back,as I told her, how I so missed her.! She welcomed me back, with loving, wiinter’s sweet.grace! My emerald enhantress, I skated on you ‘neath God’s auspicious moon. You were the sweet, happy days of a poet’s memorable, childhood. I dream of her pond,under winter’s grinning, nightfall,which is soon!

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 12/14/2023 5:48:00 PM

Panagiota your poem is a beautiful and evocative piece that captures the essence of childhood memories and the joy of winter. Your imagery and emotions conveyed through the words are truly captivating and heartwarming. Lovely! - Blessings, Daniel

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 12/11/2023 11:16:00 AM

Beautiful read of beautiful memories! I liked it very much, a fav :-) Have a nice day ~ AA

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/11/2023 11:43:00 AM

Dear Abdullah. Welcome to Pangie’s house. I am far from the brightest poet on the block. Thats not my goal, just here to write about my experiebes in plain understandable, English in forms that work for me, There is nobody to impress. What for? Life is short, yo are special by being genuine. I am impressed you faved this and totally pleased .and thappy thanks to you. Merci, Pangie,

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/11/2023 8:40:00 AM

This poem brings back memories. Outdoor skating is great fun for children. It's wonderful that you had that experience. Each paragraph opened another chapter of childhood joy.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/11/2023 10:33:00 AM

Welcome to my poetry hearth and home. Outdoor skating is inddeed fun.i see youdid it also! Great.))) I taught school forr yrears and ost jds were jogyful. I dont knoew if they still are. Meaning..violence in many places… Merci, Pangie

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 12/11/2023 6:40:00 AM

A splendid recall of your youth, Pangie. Well written! Bob H

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/11/2023 10:26:00 AM

Hello Bob, oh to be a little girl again. Simce my leg surgery, can no longer kneeel dow for any reeason, Bummer. Very limiting, but better to be able to walk.)) Merci, Pangie

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/10/2023 10:17:00 PM

What beautiful memories you have of your childhood Pangie. Your very own personal ice rink, I can't ice skate to save my life lol. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/11/2023 12:19:00 AM

Hi Tom! It indeed was nice having moy own pond. And.. I could always go into the house for some hot chocolate. Just a few steps away.. how perfect was that?One has to think back and be grateful for whatever we have.. these were blessings. I know you know it is because I know you well enough.. I had lessons when I was very young. I mean I’m not an Olympian skater I never was.. I always had fear, but I had fun too. The last time I skated was about 25 years ago.. I fell on my arse and they made me go home and I didn’t want to. I was at a rink with a short skirt on and having fun. Maria was there too.. I appreciate you stopping by today and hoping you’re feeling better.. I’m OK some pain you know what that’s like. I hope I’ll be more active here in the new year.. wish you merry Christmas and also happy new year. God bless you with the surgery.. be good, follow everything they sayo. Merci , Pangie

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/10/2023 7:12:00 PM

Panagiota, Figure skating in a child's frozen wonderland. So ready for enchanting memories like this. Best season's wishes for you and yours my poet friend. -Richard that are relatable.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/10/2023 8:03:00 PM

Hello dear friend, Richard…. You can see in my comments to Sara my experiences with figure skating….. And as you know last year, when I broke my thigh in three places.there will be no more dancing or skating. That breaks my heart.. and I hear music and I go crazy but I can’t dance!yes, my parents paid for skating lessons. I was not that great at it but it sure was good exercise and fun and companionship better than being online like kids are now.. so sad and gross. Wishing you a Christmas season of love and hope I will be online more in 2024. Hope I will write much better.. Keep in touch !Merci.,Pangie