William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rhyme

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The Elysian

The Elysian

Of a dawning in a brilliant twilight hoverance,
Skipping along an unmarked trail so unexpectedly,
Dared naught say out mumbled words offered without pure malice,
None receptive to my thoughts for a soulless oddity.

2019 May 10

*2nd Place*

Arbitrium Divisa
~~Gregory R Barden

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Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2019 at 5:50 PM Congratulations on one of the second placements. Very well done, William. William Kelii Kekaula June 13, 2019 at 5:53 PM A pat-on-our backs both Andrea, Aloha William

Gershon Wolf June 13, 2019 at 1:46 PM William, congratulations on the honor, the privilege, of a 2nd-place trophy in Gregory Barden's contest. Greg's standards are the highest and his judgment is unerring (at least in my opinion). You can really take pride in this win, my friend. Best wishes, Gershon William Kelii Kekaula June 13, 2019 at 1:52 PM Still lacking my attentions, Gregory is an astute person, thanks GW! Aloha William

Connie Marcum Wong June 13, 2019 at 1:01 PM I have come to know that I can always expect the unique and intriguing from you William and I love it! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) xxoo William Kelii Kekaula June 13, 2019 at 1:51 PM They'd be the etherealist in me, appreciate it Connie, Aloha William

Line Gauthier June 13, 2019 at 9:46 AM Congrats on your win, William. Well done. William Kelii Kekaula June 13, 2019 at 10:19 AM Thanks for the know Line and thanks, Aloha William