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The Elysian

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The Elysian

Of a dawning in a brilliant twilight hoverance,
Skipping along an unmarked trail so unexpectedly,
Dared naught say out mumbled words offered without pure malice,
None receptive to my thoughts for a soulless oddity.

2019 May 10

*2nd Place*

Arbitrium Divisa
~~Gregory R Barden

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/13/2019 5:50:00 PM Congratulations on one of the second placements. Very well done, William. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 6/13/2019 5:53:00 PM A pat-on-our backs both Andrea, Aloha William

Gershon Wolf Date: 6/13/2019 1:46:00 PM William, congratulations on the honor, the privilege, of a 2nd-place trophy in Gregory Barden's contest. Greg's standards are the highest and his judgment is unerring (at least in my opinion). You can really take pride in this win, my friend. Best wishes, Gershon Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 6/13/2019 1:52:00 PM Still lacking my attentions, Gregory is an astute person, thanks GW! Aloha William

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/13/2019 1:01:00 PM I have come to know that I can always expect the unique and intriguing from you William and I love it! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) xxoo Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 6/13/2019 1:51:00 PM They'd be the etherealist in me, appreciate it Connie, Aloha William

Line Gauthier Date: 6/13/2019 9:46:00 AM Congrats on your win, William. Well done. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 6/13/2019 10:19:00 AM Thanks for the know Line and thanks, Aloha William