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The Elixir of Life

The Elixir of Life we all need to sup A teaspoon a day to cheer us all up Our world is such a beautiful place But evil spirits inhabit this space If only by drinking the Elixir of Life Like a magical potion; like waving a wand A sprinkling of fairy dust sparkling on all of us To change human nature; evil spirits superfluous Banishing cruelty and sin and malevolence Bringing back kindness and love and pure innocence But sadly there is no magical potion Just a whimsical fantasy - a far-fetched notion Written 9th November 2018 Contest: Mid January 2019 Sponsor: Brian Strand Contest Screwed XX Sponsor Rob Carmack 13th place

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Date: 2/13/2019 8:54:00 PM
Well-expressed observation of life's reality. Congrats. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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