The Elixir of Life

The Elixir of Life we all need to sup
A teaspoon a day to cheer us all up
Our world is such a beautiful place
But evil spirits inhabit this space
If only by drinking the Elixir of Life
Like a magical potion; like waving a wand
A sprinkling of fairy dust sparkling on all of us
To change human nature; evil spirits superfluous 
Banishing cruelty and sin and malevolence 
Bringing back kindness and love and pure innocence
But sadly there is no magical potion
Just a whimsical fantasy - a far-fetched notion


Written 9th November 2018
Contest: Mid January 2019
Sponsor: Brian Strand


Contest  Screwed XX
Sponsor  Rob Carmack 
13th place
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Agustin Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 8:54 PM
Well-expressed observation of life's reality. Congrats. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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